Beware of love

by P00ki3B3ar   Jul 7, 2009


Light fades from the burden
Darkness flows from the pain
Your precious little angel
Is a demon from hell
Who stole what was rightfully mine
And killed what was my life
Trampled by the fear
She used it to drain me dear
I groaned in agony
But the affliction only grew stronger
She became a lustful little mange
Who used you for her precious little game
Heeding in all the torment from the shame
That a speechless cheater played
A battle that she had won against myself
Suddenly I was worthless in the likes of you
Loss in all means of my untainted world
You tended to her needs consistently
Now she easily inhibits you
With simple little pricks of bewitched
Affection and beauty and in the end
Earned herself her blood stained Devil Wings

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  • 15 years ago

    by David ODonnell

    A very descriptive piece. There is emotion in poetry and quite clearly a lot in this particular piece.

    It's almost raw and down to the bone and if not for the metaphors but they were great with the flow of the poem. Using words such as Stained, affliction & inhibits. These are great words to use in a poem thats full of emotional anger. You told me that you wish you could write better but this Melissa is one of your good reads. I haven't gone through all of your material yet but it this piece where your choice of words really do play the part well in your message and warning of love.

    I enjoyed this piece and due to my personality, likes and dislikes, I award it 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by xxMagioxx

    TY for commenting on my poems btw :) I find your poems to be way more mature than my. I use such simple words to describe things, where as you use a mixture of complicated and unique words in yours XD

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    A battle that she had won against myself
    Suddenly I was worthless in the likes of you
    Loss in all means of my untainted world

    *I love these lines. You use amazing diction and I love the use of periodic syntax. I felt you did a wonderful job with expressing your pain and anger here. This was a very emotional piece. Keep it up and thanks for the comment ^.^ Nik*

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