Panic

by Jad   Jul 8, 2009


Looking to the left,
Looking to the right,
Were all losing sight.
As we start to lose the fight.

We begin to look faster,
For a way to escape,
But were already in the fate,
And its far too late.

Now in a frenzy
Running to dead ends,
Only panic now wins,
As we start to rend.

In just one heart beat.
Panic can sink in,
Even if you try to fend.
You will never win.

Now at last it's over,
And I'm again paranoid.
Lost in the void,
For all else is destroyed.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is a good poem
    there was one line that did not make sense to me though...
    "But were already in the fate,"
    i believe were is supposed to be we're
    and i just dont think this line fits with the rest of the stanza
    i find it totally throws the whole flow off

    everything else is excellent
    and i still believe it deserves a 5/5

    Keenan

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