Comments : Infidel

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    "you are an open wound of rage
    from previous battles, restrained in cage
    by own bitter choice
    you resent it, yet you are paranoia
    and oblivion is your panacea
    conspiracy is your voice"
    ^Your choice of words here was simply Amaze-ing!!! I love it and I totally love your metaphors!

    "relish in chaos and laugh in pain
    inflict hurt just to stay sane"
    ^Loved the imagery here..very well done!!

    How come I've never read this poem before..seriously, this is one of the most beautiful dark poems I've read in my life!
    I LOVE IT!
    Rock on <3 ;)