by kylexthexmagnificent Jul 8, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I see the darkness in my eyes, |
by Hollymariee
Very good imagery , and nice mix of freeverse and rhyme . |
Dark write wit great flow. With some editing could be perfect but it's a good write as it is. |
by Hollywood
I love how you write |
Wow! This is just... Phenomenal. |