by No Need For A Name Jul 8, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Jack got tipped in the pouring rain |
by BlueJay
My gosh this piece is amazing. There is so much emotion, the desceiptions are amazing and I love this piece. The flow is excellent, the word choice is spactacular, you have penned a stunning piece. 5/5 of course |
by Mommy And Me
Reading it, things flowed well... singing it, there were some lines that didn't flow off the tounge as nicely. overall it was a wonderfully written poem. good work. |
by SheenaMarie
Amazing lyrics 5/5 |
by KemistryKia
[loved]]itt...[[5]]/5 |
by East Poetry
OMG.... How could anybody give this write a 3. DO they know its a song!!! this is awesome. 5/5 |