Nice poem.

OMG.... How could anybody give this write a 3. DO they know its a song!!! this is awesome. 5/5
I want to hear the song more than ever. I would like that very much. you record anything yet?

Ive said it once and ill say it again. If you play and sing as good as you write. Your going places.

Randy

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Amazing lyrics 5/5

Reading it, things flowed well... singing it, there were some lines that didn't flow off the tounge as nicely. overall it was a wonderfully written poem. good work.

terra

My gosh this piece is amazing. There is so much emotion, the desceiptions are amazing and I love this piece. The flow is excellent, the word choice is spactacular, you have penned a stunning piece. 5/5 of course