by Inside the Liar Jul 9, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Building a sand castle |
Wow. |
by Corruption
This is a great poem |
Definitely an excellent poem. loved the style loved the emotion and i loved the metaphor 5/5 keep it up. |
by Crys908
Wow this is great. i love the metaphor of how a relationship is like a sand castle. and about learning to build relationship takes a lot of test and trial. you've just got to learn by making mistakes. :) good luck! |
'You take a bunch |