by xbrokinxlillxgirlx Jul 9, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
As i walked in to the room |
by Baby Rainbow
Hi, this poem is good because it is a very touching subject and hold a lot of emotion in which people who read it can relate to in a lot of ways. i think the grammer could improve to make the poem flow better and easier to read. the title of the poem is good and a strong fit to the poem, so well done. x 4/5 from me x |