Comments : I cant let go

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Hi, this poem is good because it is a very touching subject and hold a lot of emotion in which people who read it can relate to in a lot of ways. i think the grammer could improve to make the poem flow better and easier to read. the title of the poem is good and a strong fit to the poem, so well done. x 4/5 from me x