Wow Ashley...what a creepy poem. I feel like your in my head or something. Very cool poem you have here. Good work using the lyric too ^.^ Nik

I love it.. definatly looking into someones eyes will tell a whole different story then what they put out there. Someones eyes tell so much.. sometimes we can look into a persons eyes and feel exactly what they are feeling. In this case, it scares you because you think they will do something bad. Unique way of using the lyric.. not exactly what I was expecting.. well done.

This poem is simply amazing! i must say this is one of the poems that proves not all poems have to rhyme to have flow. the structure was great and the message was extremely clear definitely a 5/5 keep it up

Nice write.. loved the title... its beautiful.. very dark and creepy write...
just a suggestion - try removing number of I's you have used :) it would sound even better :)

Great poem
i really liked it
the last two lines were classic...
"I know the truth
and it scares me"
but the whole poem was great
my other favourite part was the deadly signs
and the vast sea part
good job
and thx for the comment :)

Keenan