This is a good deep poem. first off the title is good and strong which draws the reader in.

the opening line is eye catching and the flow was continued until the end making it enjoyable and easy to read.

i think the questions you have asked are well written, it is like the writer asking himself but also asking the reader which is very clever.

the picture created was made very clear by your words and i could picture every line as i read it.

the ending of this poem was powerful and a good choice to do so.

very good poem, keep it up. x

The dark is a comfort to some, our best works are created hidden from the light. I found this to be well done and touched with realism