Wow! That was so deep and touching. It was like reading a bible or listening to a sermon of wisdom. It’s a shame not too many people think like this. There’s just too much ignorance. A poem like this brings a sigh of relief, especially with the realistic imagery. 5/5

This is a insprational poem its very detailed makes you ponder
the wording is fantastic
the structure is layed out very well within the poem
the rythem is really smooth flowing and easy to follow

on the first stanza the last word should be insanity not insane

but other than that really well done 5/5

You can really see your faith come through in this poem.. Thought the poem is more concentrated on a life that is scared to open up for the world is a nasty cruel place.. but with with trouble and pain the person is united by others of the faith.. It may not be the nature of this poem but it's what i saw in it.. Though it is hard to go back over it as i am using my mobile phone as my internet browser lol

I really love this poem! I think it is written amazingly. It is worded very well and it has a very nice flow. This is a really wonderful poem, I really enjoyed reading it.

"It's like we fear what could happen but never does-
Never allowing ourselves to live in peace and serenity-
We fear both future and past; What will be and what was.
Let us open our self's up to the world of Christs divinity."
I love this stanza because it is so true. We spend so much time about things that may or may not happen and things we have done that we often don't enjoy right now.

This is really great, don't stop writing!!