Walked Off The Edge

by Good Enough   Jul 10, 2009


Lets start the suffering
Lets squeeze my heart
I'm on the edge of the cliff

Look down, look down

Your pounding in my head
I feel you in my blood
I take a step forward

Let go, just let go

Your grip gets tighter
I can't breathe anymore
I start to fall

Give up, give up

My life is wrecked
Lets all watch me
As I take this fatal fall

Look up, look up

I pray to the Gods
As I fall to my death
Crash, boom, break

I'm dead, I'm dead

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  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    No matter how hopeless things seem and how difficult life is, just look up hun--theres faith out there to pull you through your difficult times. This poem was rather heartbreaking and full of sadness and pure emotion, but well written. Ever need someone to talk to, you know where to find me.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Aww Ashley :( you forgot the part where I save you! This is really good, but so sad. I don't want you to die. I want you to live and keep blessing the world with your amazing poetry. You're so talented hun. Keep it up and cheer up. *huggies* Nik

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