Ray
what a heartbreaking poem of love.

Without your love, time is stolen away
Thought I'm unbreakable each passing day
Moment by moment dwindling away
Into my bones until I am gray

Without the one we love with us. Life becomes almost unbarable. Till it feels like you become just a shell of what you were.

Good job!
~Hugs~
Cindy

Aw, this was beautiful! i absolutly positivley loved it?! awsum job!

Aly

"Tears just knows, only one direction..."
- Down they go! I love this prhase. It creates vivid images, and stirs several emotions. 5/5

mandy :)

"Without you, the glare of hope I felt,
Between here and now are too late
Night after night I bleed to forget,
Lying down in my bed of regrets"

I feel a strong emotion in this one. I really love it. The poem was amazing. Great job!

-Shadow