The last line was too long. So you may wanna fix that. Otherwise a short but emotion filled write. We cant overturn or fix the past, but yes it does cause many regrets for some but you eventually get past that and realize you cant do anything about it, no matter how difficult it is to accept that. Good job. |
by Good Enough
I really liked this poem mostly because im gng thru the same thing. The best thing to do is look forward. Great write. |