by Jad Jul 12, 2009
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Shapeless clouds above, |
A wonderful haiku, I loved each line and you portrayed such truth and beauty. Great work, keep it up! God bless you and have a good week. |
by Lady Nik
Lovely haiku Austin ^.^. Nik |
Loved your second line, you made it your own without saying it was vapor; you put more description into it without saying the actual word. A beautiful write. |