One Little Betta Fish

Hehe i like this poem
it is a nice read
"Flaring little fins
Rise in defeat
This place is not a home
Her heart so incomplete"
that stanza i found spoke to me
it sounded beautiful and
i found it created perfect imagery

great job
thx for the comment also

Keenan

Awww...poor little fish. This almost made me cry. Ashley you're such a mind blowing poet. I love reading your poems. I never get the same thing, always something new and original. Very creative hun. Keep em' coming. Nik ^.^

A simple metaphor of a person who is a fish, a sad little write but well written. It flowed wonderfully. Well done.