A beautiful transcript of love and togetherness. I like the overall flow of the poem and throughly enjoyed the descriptive feelings that met so perfectly with the description of the scenery and settings. A wonderful piece of art :)

-SiE (",)

Beautifully written, Deana. I am amazed I am the second to comment on this...it is so beautiful!

Close my eyes to feel the dream
Happiness within my reach
No longer do I need to seek
For you are in my keeping...
Forever... in my keeping.

^^

I love this ending, I feel this way about someone too:)

You are a good writer, I wish you posted more often:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

I agree !!!! I just let myself fall into your poem and gladly let your words fill me as I drowned in it happy all the while. If I had to pick one poem today that seems to meet and exceed the "excellant bar" you have cleared it with ease. I really like it and all the thoughts you painted for us. Bravo!

What a beautiful poem. It's full of imagery, tender emotions touched with sensual overtones. Excellent write
I enjoyed the rhyme theme, nothing to say but impressive