The Ghosts of Summers Lost

Thanks Lostlove1. A melancholy walk at my hometown's lake inspired this one.

Wonderful... Wonderful. Was truly captured by this poem.

Especially loved these two lines:

"Feeling lost and out of reach
On this twilight rendezvous"

Great word choice.

Always,
Jeannie

Great work!

How the drifting white sands fly
O'er this barren, windy shore
Like the years that pass me by
Leaving ghosts forevermore.

Excellent writting!

An amazing write! I loved this verse..

"Voices calling on the breeze
Past the rocks where I would play
Laughing banter through the trees
Echoes from another day."

I loved how you captured how sometimes a simple incident , (here a walk) can suddenly bring childhood memories flooding back to our mind... and we feel we are transported back in time. You captured this so well :] ...
I LOVED IT!

This poem is amazing. Each stanza that i red left me thinking...
"When dusk comes, I take my walk
Meeting ghosts of Summers lost
Near the lake, they often flock
On the paths, in youth, I crossed". This is absolutely great, and so much of us can relates to this. Very well done 5/5, kel.