I Am

"I am a dreamer and a fighter
I wonder if the world will ever change
I hear the birds calling out to me
I see my dad watching over me
I want my friends to live happy fulfilling lives
I am a dreamer and a fighter"

You express yourself very well here, I didn't really like the third and fourth line together, they just didn't seem to relevant.

"I pretend that things don�t bother me
I feel safe cause I know my dad is watching me
I touch people�s dreams
I worry that I wont see my parents again
I cry over the loss of a friend
I am a dreamer and a fighter"

In the first and third line: Just delete that a thingy, its just an error.

Fourth line: "wont" should be "won't".

I also like the repetition of "I am a dreamer and a fighter".

"I understand that I will not live forever
I say everything has a purpose
I dream of meeting my dad one day
I try to do good in school
I hope that I will become a successful veterinarian
I am a dreamer and a fighter"

I liked this part a lot, you really put out your feelings and wants so well, and describe what you dream of. I hope they come true for you.

I really am not a fan of every line starting with "I", but that's fine, it didn't pop out to me or keep me extremely captivated, but it was still a good read.

4/5 from me, keep writing, always and forever..

~MaryAnne