"suns rays" should be "sun's rays".

This was a short but powerful piece, well-expressed thoughts and feelings, you really get the reader into this piece, and you had me wanting more at the end. Excellent job, keep writing, always and forever..

~MaryAnne

I like the multiple meanings that "he" could have. He could be the child, the father, the parent, the teacher, even god depending on how you read it. The different number of people that you could be talking make this poem more vercitile, and thus more powerful to the readers.

Great job and thanks for the read.