Not Just A Nightmare

by Saving Grace   Jul 13, 2009


Held down by invisible ropes,
The pain too much to bare,
Im crying out for help,
But no-one seems to care.

The pain covers my body,
It engulfs my shattered heart,
As he takes another step closer,
I sob and fall apart.

I fight to find the strength,
The strength to just wake up,
I try my hardest but i cant,
I guess im out of luck.

He pushes the knife across my skin,
Crimson blood trickles down,
I let out a painful cry,
And my tears hit the ground.

He flashes me a sly smile,
As he unzips his old, ripped jeans,
Im still paralized from terror,
While ontop of me he leans.

I hear my heart thumping,
Inside my beaten chest,
I just want to wake up!
And forget about the rest.

The torturous minutes pass on by,
Feeling like years to me.
I wish it was JUST a nightmare,
But its a f**king memory.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    .. I am speechless . The emotions I felt probably could have come close to the victim's .. POWERFUL ending .. Perfect flow , amazing . Just .. Amazing .

  • 15 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    Wow... this poem was very pulling, it had perfect flow & description & your wording was just amazing... it gave me goosebumps & shivers!! I would have to say i enjoyed readin this poem but only for the rhythmicc flow not for the stpry line..

    & darl im hoping with all my heart that you have just made this up.. But if not im forever sorry & wish you all my blessings xxxx

  • 15 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    He flashes me a sly smile,
    As he unzips his old, ripped jeans,
    Im still paralized from terror,
    While ontop of me he leans.

    I hear my heart thumping,
    Inside my beaten chest,
    I just want to wake up!
    And forget about the rest.

    The torturous minutes pass on by,
    Feeling like years to me.
    I wish it was JUST a nightmare,
    But its a f**king memory.

    oh my god if this happend i am so so sorry i know right on how you feel here hun.......this same thing happened to me to but im always herer k

    great poem deep draws you in 10/5

  • 15 years ago

    by FindingHarmonyInYurCries

    I dont know why you say you arent a good writer .. That was very well written. You have the fear and pain to make people turn their heads .. Keep it up, hun. :) xx 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Kuro

    I don't think i need to tell you how shocking this is. it fills my heart with sorrow, fear and anger.

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