That's terrible, and I'm very sorry.
Aside from that, it was a great write. very strong, and it flowed well. good job!

That's terrible, and I'm very sorry.
Aside from that, it was a great write. very strong, and it flowed well. good job!

Wow. . i uh dont really know what to say. if that happened im sry. as for the poem, i like it, it was well written and flowed nicely.

Wow that reminds me of my poem thanks for the nightmares! it's so scary if that happened to you, but i know what you're going through if it's true. i'm so sorry. this is a perfect description, the imagery was amazing. i felt like i was you. the flow was great and the word choice was just deadly. 5/5

Wow, i dont know what to say this was just wow.
Very deep, and great rhyme, i hope the stroy isnt true tho, if you ever need to talk you can pm me anytime.
But the poem was great, great rhyme,flow and structure just a brilliant write.

Great Work
5/5

Wow-that was rly rly rly intense. very well done though.
an easy 5/5-love the power of the last 2 lines.
great work
xxxx

This was sad, but written well. the way everything flowed together was incredible. i liked it (=

Wow so sad and true great words u used and such a picture u painted with ur words great work and I hope this made u feel better to write about it 5/5

Tammi,

*Held down by invisible ropes,
The pain too much to bare,
Im crying out for help,
But no-one seems to care.*

WOW jus WOW i mean it was ood the beging reaelly drags you in and the end is way good to 10/5

That's pretty powerful...wow

I don't think i need to tell you how shocking this is. it fills my heart with sorrow, fear and anger.

I dont know why you say you arent a good writer .. That was very well written. You have the fear and pain to make people turn their heads .. Keep it up, hun. :) xx 5/5

He flashes me a sly smile,
As he unzips his old, ripped jeans,
Im still paralized from terror,
While ontop of me he leans.

I hear my heart thumping,
Inside my beaten chest,
I just want to wake up!
And forget about the rest.

The torturous minutes pass on by,
Feeling like years to me.
I wish it was JUST a nightmare,
But its a f**king memory.

oh my god if this happend i am so so sorry i know right on how you feel here hun.......this same thing happened to me to but im always herer k

great poem deep draws you in 10/5

Wow... this poem was very pulling, it had perfect flow & description & your wording was just amazing... it gave me goosebumps & shivers!! I would have to say i enjoyed readin this poem but only for the rhythmicc flow not for the stpry line..

& darl im hoping with all my heart that you have just made this up.. But if not im forever sorry & wish you all my blessings xxxx

.. I am speechless . The emotions I felt probably could have come close to the victim's .. POWERFUL ending .. Perfect flow , amazing . Just .. Amazing .