by Obscura Jul 13, 2009
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Looking for inspiration, |
by Em
Looking for inspiration, |
by Gasttlee
It's clear you had plenty of inspiration to help create such an excellent poem. The rhyming was awesome and the images in it flowed like magic. |
Well, there are no simple words for this poem. It was amazing from start to finish. It caught hold of me at the second stanza because most poems that are not "rhyming" usually loose sight of the main point of the poem. They are usually just words put together. Your focus was shown throughout the piece. I like how real you were about everything, yet you made it your own version of the reality for instance |
by Lauren
I really like this poem. I think this is pretty powerful. It is full of alot of emotion and you can certainly feel the frustration. I think that you worded this poem very well and it gives it a somewhat sophisticated feel. I think you did a great job. |
by East Poetry
Looking for inspiration, |