by Lady Nik
I gathered my anger |
'I walked through nature |
by E <3
"I've been looking for inspiration, |
by Cate Rock
I liked this poem...a bit choppy at the end and kinda...just droped the first astablished stanza and just poured onto what u really ment...but its cool 5/5 |
This is a well written piece that I feel most writers |
This was deeply moving. Life can seem so dull and devoid of anything of any interest and value. |
"I sat down and tried to collect my thoughts |
Nice write, but I felt it could be more powerful for example take the first stanza: |
"Looking for inspiration, |
by Good Enough
Wow. Its great. Really it is. I like the irony cause ur writing about not being able to write and this poem is written well. Glad to help. The part i like the most is the vocabublary and the little rhrymes here and ther. Great job. 5/5 |
Awesome! Love the irony and choice of words. Great job! 5/5 |
by Hollywood
I liked this alot it was a very good write. |
by Love Panda
What can i actuallt say that could be construde as nice and helpful..nothing. im shocked! you asked so many people for help with this and it doesnt look like you changed anything but a word or two here and there. |
by victoria
"I sat down and tried to collect my thoughts |
by East Poetry
Looking for inspiration, |
by Lauren
I really like this poem. I think this is pretty powerful. It is full of alot of emotion and you can certainly feel the frustration. I think that you worded this poem very well and it gives it a somewhat sophisticated feel. I think you did a great job. |
Well, there are no simple words for this poem. It was amazing from start to finish. It caught hold of me at the second stanza because most poems that are not "rhyming" usually loose sight of the main point of the poem. They are usually just words put together. Your focus was shown throughout the piece. I like how real you were about everything, yet you made it your own version of the reality for instance |
by Gasttlee
It's clear you had plenty of inspiration to help create such an excellent poem. The rhyming was awesome and the images in it flowed like magic. |
by Em
Looking for inspiration, |