'I sniff in the richest scents
that I have smelled for all time.'
`I think this would read better as;
'I inhale the richest scents,
that have lingered for indefinate time.'
- - Something along those lines. I think the way you worded it is awkward.

'wonder back into view'
`I think you meant wander not wonder

Lovely write! Whenever times are rough and we dont feel like thinking about the bad, we wish to drift into a dream to escape from everything.

Well done darling :]

I like this poem
i know it is not all dark and dreary but
it is still a nice read :)
and it speaks the truth
although feeling normal is overrated
:D

Keenan
ps thx for the comment :D

I really like this poem :)

the end gets kinda dark but it fits perfectly

Keep posting :D 5/5 ---- you and B.R. Hopkins make my days happy lol

This could be printed in a book for children. A fairy story atmosphere. Great imagery and flow
Very enjoyable

I love this poem

Great job

Dreams are an endless world of imagination and I often wish sometimes reality could be the same way, but then we wouldn't appreciate dreams so much. It's definately nice to escape reality whenever possible, the break keeps you sane.... enough. nice work 5/5 GG23