Final Wishes

by Lady Nik   Jul 13, 2009


I can't take it anymore.
This constant breathing
through itchy lungs,
thick blood flowing
to places it doesn't belong.
I wish I had a gun
just this one time.
Bang! Bang! Blast!
brains on the floor
I can't take it anymore.

I can't get out of this
massive hole I'm buried in.
Fakes and lies
I call my best friends.
Kick me to the lowest level
for I am the greatest sin.
I wish I had a knife
just for a few minutes.
Slash! Slash! Scream!
Scarlet drops from many slits
I can't get out of this.

I've always wanted to fly.
away from the pain inflicted upon me.
Nightmare's so vivid
they wouldn't let me sleep.
Black and blood
How can scars bleed?
I wish I had a rope
just for a few seconds
Hang! Hang! Help!
I'm swinging up so high
I've always wanted to fly.

*Thanks for the help Temps ^.^ *

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jay Perry Jr

    It make me want to read more i love it :)

  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    This shows your range of talent. You're creative and full of imagination. I liked this poem yet it lacked a certain dazzle your other had. But still well done
    :] Keep up the good work and I'll keep reading

  • 15 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    I love this poem because right now i feel as if i can relate to each line

  • 15 years ago

    by -] Nobody [-

    I reckon everybody eventually finds themselves in a hole when it comes to life - I've moved on up and out of mine but this poem reminded me of back in the day ---- Very well written with lots of creativity. I think description validates a great poem compared to a normal poem - you had a lot of that so props!

    5/5 -- Don't know when it was posted but I'll nominate it

    Peace!

  • 15 years ago

    by Corruption

    Oh my good lord
    i am in love with this
    poem
    like i think my eyes came alittle hah
    "Slash! Slash! Scream!
    Scarlet drops from many slits"
    BEAUTIFUL!!!!
    "Hang! Hang! Help!
    I'm swinging up so high
    I've always wanted to fly"
    PERFECTION!!!!!

    this piece is amazing like seriously
    if i could nominate any poems this week
    this one would be one for sure!!!!

    like seriously reading this poem
    made me come alive
    i know it is very sad
    but the sadness and self loathing seeping from it all that emotion
    it was magical :D
    great piece :D

    Keenan

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