A quick note to all those who are commenting on my poem:

I know this poem doesn't rhyme all the time, and I know it has a very jerky rhythm. I did that on purpose, as I feel they add to the tone/mood/message of the poem. If you don't know what I mean, try reading it again with that in mind.

I liked it Sean. Believe it or not, i can relate ;-). I also liked the repetition of "all the same" and i think it was clever.
Aken Sol

Once again your work has impresses me. I am really enjoying reading all your poems. Like I said before Keep up all the good work.
Tourniquet