Interesting onion usage. Good job.

Chopping little pieces
Crying some more
Tears become real
Escaping from my core

*This was my favorite part. Ashley you are really writing some creative pieces this week. I could never write about onions..that's so creative and out of the box. I love the way you think. This was brillant. Keep it up babe. Nik*

I hate hate hate cutting onions.. I always have someone do it for me because it makes me cry. I love the little personal touch put in the poem, how when youre cutting the onions you can also release the real tears and nobody can tell.. short write but I cant say Ive seen many poems written about onions. :)

Great job girl 5/5 miss you <333

This is another great poem by you :D
good job
its an easy read
and the message is clear
and also it is pretty sad...

Keenan

Very, very, very creative.
I love how you used the onion in the whole passage. awesome write! 5/5 :)

That's Genius. You're very creative. I envy your writing skills so much. Everything I write fails, so i delete it, haha. Much Love; Looking forward to more of your work.