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by Emely Jul 15, 2009 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
I'm the reason for the problem people screaming at my face, I dont wanna see them for the rest of the day. This will haunt me forever until the very end, this is no treasure its something i defend I keep thinking about it I want it to go away, my heart is no longer lit I want to end the day. Just a simple smile is all I need Come cherish the moment with me Hope is nothing Love is hate, friends aren't something and so is faith.....
by Brittany
Meh, it was alright. I think you could have expanded your vocabulary And try more expressive words. Try to find more depth and meaning That goes for any poem you will write. Get into it Hope I helped =) Check mine out?