by The Black Rose Jul 16, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
My mind |
Amazing choice of words. powerful.beautiful.passionate. keep writing you have good potential.5/5 |
I've have wished a lot lately to die. Things would be better. |
I can feel the emotion you're trying to present...but it lacks the fluency of speech, it's hard to see through the words. That can be the hardest part. Maybe look up new words other than death and destruction? |