This was amazing. I love the last lines. it sums it up very well. Its dark and exotic at the same time. In stanza 5 i think.. Darkness is capitalized like its a human more then a thing. Makes it more emotional. Good job

Wow...

~They come when they want,
Take what they need,
I give what I have,
And take what I can~
i love this line the most...its just so true i love your poem 5/5 great job! i'll keep on reading your poem.

You put a unique twist to this one, it was almost creepy in a way.. well duh it was cause it's a dark poem. Okay, I'm telling you something you already know, but no really there was something about this that wasnt like other dark poems and I cant quite figure out what it was but it was brilliant.

Well done.

Choice of words is good well structure like the style and story of the poem

This was a walk on the wicked side lol. I agree with all the comments above. Again you have entertained us in an amazingly different way
Very enjoyable

Just an fyi, the 'your' at the end should be 'you're' as in 'you are.'

Frightening poem, yet somehow incredibly captivating. I couldn't help but feel what I was reading.