Very well written. Although I may make a suggestion...i will send it to you in PM. But altough its a a really well written piece I enjoyed it a whole bunches. =]

OH YEAH!!! i forgot to add, I also loved the last stanza. It's so well written. 5.5

I like this poem; something I would write/read and enjoy it!! =) I like how you ended it; perfect!
Keep writing

This is a really good poem there was a lot of power and emotion in it the rythem is really smooth and well flowing and the structure is very well laid out within the poem a very impressive piece of work

well done 5/5

You have a way with words, hard to narrow my liking in this poem down to a few lines, i did not dislike anything about this poem, the words flowed smoothly and naturally, it was obvious i think to me that this poem is beautifully written, i like the opening the best i think, the first two stanza's.

"I just can't leave my resentments behind."

^^ This line was awesome. It brought the first seven lines together and tied them all so it made sense and offers a conclusion, if you like. The persona is so full of hate and disgust, which is evident through words like "ripped", "malicious" and "hate". This is when it becomes obvious that the persona is so full of hate and resentment and it's difficult for them to let go of those things.

"I wonder if anyone notices that this broken heart still beats."

^^ The very last line makes the reader feel sorry for the persona. This is the first [and only] time that true sadness (instead of anger) has shone through. It shows that the persona isn't just an angry person; they're lonely and sad and just want somebody to notice the pain they're in.

A very expressive piece. Thank you for the read.