by ibelievedhim Jul 18, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
first love
I look at you with a smile on my face |
by Em
Beautifully written. The poem flowed wonderfully, 5/5. Em x |
A difficult subject to broach but as in all of your poems I have read treated with heart and understanding know your fear and understand your need to get it into the open so you can see what you have decided is right. |
by mandy
Beautifuly written; filled with love, joy and excitment. I felt it all, 5/5! |
by Fsams
Wow what a lovely poem....after a long time |
by Dreamofolwin
A brilliant write!... I enjoyed reading every bit of this poem. It is so heartfelt and real... like te love you have expressed in it. |