The Sun

by David Wallace   Jul 18, 2009


A creation marvelous separated by age and address your smile so radiant through blemish-less flesh your being so acquiesce

your personality astonishes my heart it just inclines in time when the bright stars shine and align decorating that bright smile,

All the universe rises in the east and sets in the west

My Amanda your the universe to me. Your beauty enshrined in my mind, your the reason my world is alive.

How benevolent a being but timeless nonetheless

The epitome of grace the embodiment of florescence,

The sun rises in the east and than sets in the west

My Amanda your spectacular like a supernova your presence is truly heaven sent.

Passion once connected us firmly through the satellites in the sky we met

Your eyes like big dippers they sparkled like the milky way please allow me to fly to your heart,

My love rises in the east and sets in the west

My soul aches for you baby let me make up for the time we spent apart all alone I weeped in the dark.

The stars orchestrate the night's sky but the sunshine is so divine as the day progress

I thought about you before each sunset while the moon was dwindling past its peak cause it was your shine I seek ,

My admiration for you rise in the east but it settled in Amanda West,

Baby your something I can not lose though my chances are bleak. I hope to catch a reflection of your rays before the day goes away to sleep.

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  • 14 years ago

    by xXDurrTYSOutHXx

    Great Poetry, I enjoyed reading this. It really painted a picture. Keep up the artwork. This is a great master peice. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Sunshine 8D

    So, I've decided that you're a great writer. Not that I didn't already know that, but I've now officially decided it [=

    Thank you for the poem sweetheart [=

    <3