by ether Jul 18, 2009
category :
Life, society /
other
There's the constructed and the reconstructed, the buildings that have gone through the same processes time and time again to make things work, or the words that have been changed, (im)perfected and debated over. There are the hearts made of plastic that choke the turtles in the sea, there are the times where you insisted that there's no life in a tree but a forest has the capacity to stop you from changing from slave to free. You've got your capitalism and your ideologies, I've been sleeping in playgrounds and flying with swings. A bird had blotted out the moon, it shone there through its wings. There's significance and soul in the most trivial things. |
This was bad ass. I did a piece of writing like this once but it was years ago before I did poetry well. You did this perfectly. It's sort of in your face at a dimly lit poetry club with snapping and cappucinos, but more than just some stupid poem, it starts a riot in the mind and makes you think. Great job. 5 |