Aww i liked this poem,
some of the rhyme was a bit off but i enjoyed reading it,
even though it was quite a sad love story it was still written very well
great job

I thought this was heartbreaking.. LOL. So well written and expressed. Its hard when we love someone, and they dont or cant love us in return... you have expressed the pain and heartache it brings so well in this poem.

Very well written and expressed.

Take care Cale,
Olwin.

Aww.. this is a very heartfelt poem. I like how you openly let out your feelings in this poem and it shows that you have been really hurt and wanted a way to let it all out.. I know it doesn't heal your heart but it does make you feel better. Good job with this poem!

This reminds me of a situation i used to be in quite a long time ago. im not sure if i ever moved on from it. but i did get a new gf. the last thing i'll do is let her know that.

im not sure, but i think that being with someone that can't love you feels worse that being alone.

~This is proof that you have people that can relate to you, and that you have other people to relate to.

~nice Job,
Ben

Wow dis poem is exactly how I feel bout sum1 d exact same position a lil different. Bt man I felt everything in dis. Truly a great poem I love it keep on writing. We shud talk

I love it .
kinda hits home with me.
brought tears to my eyes .
it's amazing.

The rythem was off alittle but very well written...i can tell you put your heart into it

Awh, Caleeee.
I loved ittt!
I think this was my favorite part:

"I got to know you and it seemed so right.
I thought that everything was turned around.
There was a reason you were on my mind at night
But instead of flying I'm still on the ground."

I love you Cale. :)

I guess thats one of the hardest things in life, trying to live without something you just can't live without. Excellent job 5/5