Comments : On This Rock

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Your words take me closer to nature and provide much enjoyment. I can close my eyes and I am there. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A mesmerising write... I loved it! Your words and images just captivate the reader, and transport them to another place... would love to be on this "mountain rock sublime!" :) Ahh.
    Another brilliant write... so well done!

    All the best,
    Olwin.

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Very beautiful and unique piece, really loved the line 'Gliding home in gold moonlight'..simply awesome.

    all the best and take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Randy,
    With every new write of yours it becomes more and more evident of how truly talented you are. Your words flow so easily and never seem forced. I absolutely adore how you can create such beautiful works and bring me closer and closer to the nature that I hold so dear. You have an exquisite way of wording them to make the reader feel as though they have just entered the place you are talking about and are able to visualize exactly the way you intrepret the poem. I absolutely adore this write. Wonderful Job
    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 15 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Thank you for all your kind words!!! I love being part of this website and knowing all the great people here! Where I live, (in Sharon, Mass) I am surrounded by forests and nature, so it affords me much opportunity to do nature poems.

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wow NightFlyer, you are truly one talented poet. Your words flowed so flawlessly and they were beautiful, just beautiful. I don't know what else to say, your wording just took my breath away and created more than a picture. I read your above comment and your surrounded by forests? That's really neat, a perfect way to get inspired. Well, great work, I nominated this for front page. Your nature poems are so unique and magical, they are my favorite and are some of the best on this whole site. Sorry if I'm repeating myself, I just want you to know how much I appreciate your work, and how talented you are. Never give that up, just keep writing. And have a fun week..

    God Bless You!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 15 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Thank you for your very kind words, Mary Anne. I appreciate your comments. And I will get back to writing some more poetry soon enough. Have a great day!!

  • 15 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    An excellent write.You are the blessed one,inspired by God's love-the nature itself.Keep writing and let us also feel the same as we are part of that place.GOD BLESS.

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Vivid imagery in this piece and a catchy little rhythm and flow. Nice job :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is one of the best poem I've read in recent times. What a captivating depiction! I loved each line of this poem. Absolutely fantastic!

  • 15 years ago

    by katie

    I like the poem alot. look fowerd to reading more. you have a greate life aheafd. have you ever thought of publishing any of your poems.