I think that at times you over-did it with the decriptions, there were too many adjectives in certain places. |
by Sylvia
It is full of images and nice ones. It is whimsical and easy to read, no profound message to try and figure out. Just a good easy to understand poem. Well done. |
by ibelievedhim
I loved it, it's so easy to read and understand. i love the imagery i felt i was there with the way you painted the poem. |
Yet another beautiful piece Ingrid, this one was filled with much magic oozing out of every line. You should really be proud of this piece, it was breathtaking as all of your poems are. Keep up the great work, have a great day! |
by mandy
That was amazing, |
by Sourav
Well... I liked the depiction and imagery it creates and that's really made it a good write. Very enjoyable! |
I have heard it said many times about a poem being over descriptive "How can that be when the words are from the writer what they feel or see at the moment.?" Each of us express ourselves differently. |
I loved it |
by Meena Krish
Your words are enough to show the reader |
by anand singh
This is just as beautiful as all your wonderful writes. |
OMG! This poem is so alluring and elegant. It gets one into a dreamy mood, in a paradise-like ambience. Emanates a serene calmness as one reads along. There's this animative movie-like scenario in this piece. How you described the fiaries dancing in the breeze as well as fireflies in the wind. Very vivid as if one is watching the colourful events unfold in the screen. |
Splendid!!! |