by ibelievedhim Jul 20, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Twisting the truth into lies |
by Em
A wonderful written poem. I liked how you expressed that we lose things in the present because of things that happened in the past, sad but true. 5/5, Em x |
Very well expressed, you have great flow and your use of wording is awesome. I enjoyed this very much and will read more from you |
"To express in ways literature can only imagine is a poets way to paint a picture". Comment back on my very own artistic paintings... |
by Hologram
Wow! |
by Gness
Its sad what people can do to you and not even feel or see what they did. All in all its a sadly written but very powerful it sends a great message to those out there who went under the same situation. |