Awwh I love this poem, can relate to it soo well too..

Particularly love the format of the last stanza, and love the lines

"The pain that I feel
The pain that I have long suffered.
Now I'm slipping far, far away....
I'm going....
I'm going....
I'm gone.... "

It's beautiful imagery, like your disappearing in the distance. I really love it =] Keep writing!! 5/5

Whoa....this was intense stuff hun. I'm with Shaun, the last stanza was my favorite as well. This has to be your best work..no doubt. Your words were hard hitting and painted a very sad picture in my mind. Such an emotional piece. I loved it. Brillant work deary. Nik

For some reason im addicted to your poems atm, once again i love your flow, its as though i can follow the thoughts you implanted in this piece