Thanks for reminding us that life is not always about pleasure. I think many times we get so involved we forget that. Well done.

Very nicely written, powerful selection of words and a meaningful message, great write

all the best and take care

Very thoughtprovoking write :] I liked it! Great word choice... and very well written!
... Brilliant.

If life would have been all about pleasure
Happiness would lost all its meaning
Then sorrow came to salvage the treasure
A tragic touch is needed to revel joyous feeling

This is true, a tragedy is needed to treasure
the little pleasures left behind...good!

If every dream would have been turned to reality
Life would miss its all climactic upheavals
Then realism savaged the dreamlands serenity
A piece of heart should be broken to relish life's carnival

I like this verse so true...so very true & well
penned!
Your choice of words just as well as the message is strong. Overall an excellent write.

A very striking remainder that we all need today. Powerful word choice and it held my attention all the way through. Thanks for the read, it had an impact on me. 5/5 from me, take care and God bless you, Child of God!

~MaryAnne