by Good Enough Jul 24, 2009
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
What goes up, must come down |
by Corruption
Great poem |
Wow what a powerful write, I was really impressed with your words and concept. Loved how you started with a quote almost and built off of it. The only two things I can suggest are try to not use and too much and both times your was used in your poem it should have been you're. Other than that very well done dear :] I'm glad I read this! |