A very short but well written poem. Many poems are about heartache but you have added a touch of creativity and made it beautifully different
Good read

Very short but nicely worded. The pain of not getting HIM. It comes out very nicely.

Can u comment my poems also Dear?

Very short but nicely worded. The pain of not getting HIM. It comes out very nicely.

Can u comment my poems also Dear?

This is a very true write about the heart! It never learns haha, Lol. But keeps falling into the same trap called "Love." ... Great poem.. and a good quote to go with it! I loved it :)

Well done!
Olwin.

Short but very well written. I like the style of this and how you're telling your heart to give up loving, I sometimes wish mine would because it seems to keep getting hurt but still wanting more. Wonderful piece, 5/5. Em x

Wow goood 5/5