I'm glad I ran across this. It was short but it captured me from the start. Left me wanting more and that's the sign of a good poet
Impressive write

Thanks---I intend on updating it eventually

I liked this very much, its simple in appearence and format, yet the meaning drives so much deeper. This is a truly...enticing poem. It makes me wonder about my own self-destructive action. Very nice.

--HollywoodSmile

Wow, i was on your profile and this title stuck out to me. I read it, loved it, and went to comment, noticing that i already had. You captured me twice with this one.
Very nice.

--HollywoodSmile