by Jay Perry Jr Jul 25, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
She beautiful and she doesn't even know it |
by Dreamofolwin
This is a VERY sweet write :) Full of tenderness and love... I LOVED it ! |
Aw this is sweet. A bit of advice try and seperate into stanzas it helps the reader even if it doesn't all rhyme. But still the main focus are on the words and you put them together well. |