by Poet on the Piano Jul 25, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
My emotions- |
by Fear2love
Wow wow wow ur good |
by Spirit
I liked the parts of your verses that can be removed from your poem. These little add-in's allowed the reader a deeper insight to the one seeking death. To me this was I great poem in progress. I say this becaues it's still seems that it has a long eat to go before it's finished and then it will be amazing. |
by Aish
Wow-this is fantastic-very dark, deep and i love the stle-although you use it quite often. i dont thik i can fault this poem actually-i cant even provide CONSTRUCTIVE criticism..... |
by Kaila
I liked the vocabulary a lot here. It worked really well and you definitly know your words. The one thing that was a little off for me was the first two lines in each stanza. The emotion was there it just seemed a bit repetitive. |
by Cindy
Great piece you have penned. Loved the imagery and word choices. |