by Jay Perry Jr Jul 25, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
A wall, there is a huge brick wall |
by danielle
Nicely written it kept me reading it your really good anyways keep up the good work |
by Dreamofolwin
Well expressed... I liked it :) The opening lines are good, and kept me reading. When love is regained our hearts are full of hope and strength again.. |
by Dreamofolwin
Well expressed... I liked it :) The opening lines are good, and kept me reading. When love is regained our hearts are full of hope and strength again.. |
Song? it had a sense of melody. Just wondering. Anyhoo, very nicely written. You expressed yourself well. It makes the reader feel emotion as they read so thats always a good thing. 5/5 |