Song? it had a sense of melody. Just wondering. Anyhoo, very nicely written. You expressed yourself well. It makes the reader feel emotion as they read so thats always a good thing. 5/5

-Hell

Well expressed... I liked it :) The opening lines are good, and kept me reading. When love is regained our hearts are full of hope and strength again..

Well done! and keep up the good work Jay!

Best wishes,
Olwin.

Well expressed... I liked it :) The opening lines are good, and kept me reading. When love is regained our hearts are full of hope and strength again..

Well done! and keep up the good work Jay!

Best wishes,
Olwin.

Nicely written it kept me reading it your really good anyways keep up the good work
5/5