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by anna Jul 25, 2009 category : Friendship, family / love, friendship
As I stroll in the night The street lights spotlighting and drown out the stars cause intensity's blinding My vision pervades me and makes me believe that the sign in the distance is you that I see And I know not the purpose of this simple offer what role do I play the girl or the mother but I know either way that this listener by nature will open you up and unfold you like paper your words soothe my nerves and I quickly discover your stories are songs I could dance to forever But I keep to myself that i'm not quite a person but a book of mistakes and I left out the worst ones And I can just tell you pay so much attention. By listening to you I've learned all of life's lessons And it's nothing like love and more than pure interest it's intrigue, a friendship This form at it's purest The time passed so quickly and next thing I know the sun's coming up as you're walking me home and we part with few words Please have a goodnight which didn't add up It was already daylight.
by Alex
YOu don't suck at writing. Your poem was pretty good...very vivid I can almost picture it.